Network infrastructure design for a banking corporation, Computer Networking

this is Our final year project where we have to create a network infrastructure design for a banking corporation for their new setup in Australia.for this we have to create network topology diagram for WAN network and Local branch Network with design specifications.we also have to mention the functional requirements and non-functional requirements of the system.
we have already submitted a report which examiner have rejected with objection on it.Now we want to have the same kind of report as the examiner has mentioned in his comments. which is given below

Overall Assessment:

•The report covers some of the unit/project aspects well and provides design alternatives and shows evidence of applying the theories learnt in project situation.

•However, the report in current state fails to meet certain requirements of the unit.

•Report may be accepted if the comments below are addressed and revisions carried out to the satisfaction of the examination board.

Planning Report :
For planning you have provided WBS and the Gantt Chart. Gantt chart is not readable which should be addressed. However WBS is good.

System Requirements Report:

System requirements are listed. See more comments in the report.

System Analysis Report:
You need to improve on this. You need to perform a good analysis on the system. You need to link identify problems with possible solution.

System Design Report:
In the network diagram you have addressed the security and the availability aspects. Further you can add on performance. VPN is a bit of a costly solution. It is always better to justify your design in terms of cost and the advantages.

Comments on overall quality of the report:

You have not fully covered the scope in your report. What you need to have in this report.
1. Requirement analysis of the project
2. Planning
3. Analysis
4. System design aspects
Your report has some quality information but needs restructuring.

This type of a report need to have following sections.

1. Cover page – with all the information about your group and the members
2. Abstract
3. Table of contents – this you have
4. If needed Table of figures
5. Table of tables
6. Introduction
7. Objective and motivation
8. Background
9. System requirements – functional non functional
10. Planning
11. System analysis – requirements, network and etc
12. System design
13. Risk and quality management
14. Conclusions
And you have added general information that we could find in the books. There are no references.
Please do not add empty tables for the report unless you need to show a template.
All the tables and figures should be numbered and named.
Please do not add links to documents such as Gantt chart. You need to add the diagrams to the document and should explain.
The links you have added are not working.
In your report you need to ensure consistency and clarity as well.
There are empty headers without content. Appendices should be at the end of the document.

Now we need a new clear project report as the examiner has mentioned in his comments.
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