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Combine and use the references below to answer the following questions.
1. Where is more evidence needed?
2. Where are more interpretations needed?
3. Are there any run-on or overly long sentences? Any sentence structure that could be improved?
4. Does the chapter open in an appealing, purposeful way? How else might the chapter begin, to better capture and direct our attention?
5. Does the chapter draw a thought-provoking conclusion that puts its argument in a larger context? What else might the conclusion explore?
6. Identify the paragraph(s) that offer the strongest support for the argument. Remember: support must contain evidence and analysis. Briefly explain why the support is effective.
7. Identify the paragraphs that offer the weakest support for the argument. Briefly explain. Does a paragraph, for example, lack evidence or analysis (or both)? Is the paragraph not clearly connected to the chapter's argument?
8. Which sentence is your favourite?
9. What questions do you have for the writer that are left unanswered or any unclear ideas, after reading the draft?