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Objective: Analyze a sample paper according to the Stance Essay grading rubric.

What "stance" is the writer advocating in the essay? In other words, what is the argument?

In the draft essay, how would you describe the body paragraphs?
Top of Form
· They are well organized but far too long.
· They are the right length but out of order.
· They seem sufficient in length and organization.
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Which of the following does the writer not support with an outside source?
· how much urban greenspace Birmingham currently has
· greenspaces increasing biodiversity
· greenspaces can revitalize brownfields
· greenspace access is plagued by inequality

According to the References row of the rubric, to what category do you think the stance draft belongs?
Top of Form
· Unacceptable
· Meets Minimum Expectations
· Fair
· Proficient
· Exemplary

Bottom of Form
What are your thoughts on the strength of the draft essay's conclusion?

In reading this draft, which area of this line of the rubric do you think the writer struggles with the most?
Top of Form
· Clarity (being easily understood)
· Writing mechanics (spelling/grammar)
· POV (point of view)
· Formatting requirements (APA style)