Reference no: EM132508063

Question 1: Who is the author of the draft you're responding to?

Question 2: How effectively does the author use kairos - the perfect timing - and why?

Question 3: Which evidence best supports the argument? Why?

Question 4: Tone and op-ed style: how effectively does the author use the title and first few sentences to "hook" the reader? Why?

Question 5: Where does the author use "snap and sizzle" in the diction and how effectively do they do so? Where's a spot that sounds formal and lacks snap and sizzle? Provide specific examples for each.

Question 6: Op Ed Style: Where does the author vary the length of their sentences and paragraphs to emphasize key points and to control the pace of op-ed - for example, by using a one sentence paragraph, or a sentence fragment? How effective is it? If all the paragraphs and sentences are about the same length, offer some suggestions where they can employ a short paragraph or sentence.

Question 7: Which visual best supports the argument? Which link? And why? Which ones could be better integrated?

Question 8: What should the author prioritize when they revise?