Reference no: EM132290521
• Read the example essay
• Discuss the following questions with your group members
• Write those answers in a journal
• Be prepared to discuss the questions as a whole group
1. How well does the introduction introduce the topic and the scope of the topic? Can you tell what the solution will be? What could the author do to strengthen the intro?
The introduction introduces the topic very well and the solution will be creating a helmet that can protect players head from injury.
2. How well does the thesis statement let readers know that there will be a concrete plan proposed to solve the problem? What could the author do to improve the thesis?
3. How well does the problem section convince readers that the problem is a huge problem that needs to be solved right away? What are two things the author could have done to improve the problem section.
The problem section is convincing readers in some way, but it also needs to prove that by giving more information and showing on the other sports too.
4. How well does the solution section give an overview of a few solutions others have tried? How well does the author present the best solution possible? What are two things the author could have done to improve the solution section.
It is very well organized and give much detail that let the readers understand the idea and whole problem and the solution.
5. How well does the implementation section give a clear, detailed look at how to solve the problem? As a reader, can you visualize how this plan could feasibly solve the problem? What are two things the author could have done to improve the implementation section?
Actually, it is not clear I think the author made it more complicated by giving too much detail.
6. Find the empirical data. How well does the author 1) present the data 2) explain the methodology 3) explain the data in light of the content of the essay?
7. Find another visual besides the one used for the empirical data. How well does the author explain the visual so that it's clear it adds to the content of the essay?
8. What is one specific idea this example idea and/or the discussion with your group members about the example essay has given you to help you improve your own essay?
Attachment:- Example Essay.rar