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Using the attached essay with feedback, please help me put together an after action assessment from my professor. I need to present a thoughtful, well-researched, organized evaluation of what worked, what did not work, why, and what I have found to help me manage the opportunities for improvement that my instructor pointed out.
The total word count for this assessment is a minimum of 350 words but extra credit will be given if the After Action Assessment should use greater detail, and fall in the upper part of the 350-500 word range. More than 500 words would be even better.
1. Assets: Writing in narrative style, identify several strengths from the attached feedback essay using no fewer than 50 words.
2. Opportunities: Writing in narrative style, identify 3 areas of improvement (from the list below) on which you might work using no fewer than 100 words each. The list below is not complete, but it should provide some suggestions from which to structure a lesson and homework plan.
1. What comments or corrections were made regarding your paper's setup? Title? Spacing?
2. What comments or corrections were made on your essay's structure and style of essay?
3. What comments or corrections were made about the length of your paper? Was it a minimum submission or sound and substantial?
4. What comments or corrections were made about your thesis statement?
5. What comments or corrections were made about your topic sentences?
6. What comments or corrections were made about your about your use of transitions?
7. What comments were made about the use of quotes or paraphrased sources?
8. What comments or corrections were given to you about your language errors?
9. What comments were made about the use of your resources?
10. Were there any other comments your instructor asked you to pay particular attention to in the future?
3. Lesson and Homework Plan:
Be specific to help me identify three (3) opportunities to improve, and once you have identified these opportunities, suggest ways you might be able to overcome these difficulties in your writing.
You might find a YouTube video (include links) that you can watch that would clarify the item your instructor pointed out in his/her feedback. You might search for helpful websites (include links) that are useful. These may include websites that host exercises. You should have at least 2 resources for each of the 3 lesson opportunities you select.
4. Progress Made/ Future Plans:
Also, please include any small progresses you have made and any continued homework scheduled.
Attachment:- Assignment.rar
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