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The selling of human eggs raises a legal problem. In fact, U.S. law does not allow people to trade in human organs, including sperm and eggs ("Millions Check In," 1999). Dr. Jeffery Kahn, Director of the Center for Bioethics at the University of Minnesota, confirms that it is an offense against federal law to deal in human parts, aside from human blood and tissue. On the other hand, he also argues that there are many important ways in which eggs should be considered more like tissue than like organs (Kahn, 1999). Meanwhile, in attempts to circumvent the law, several entrepreneurs are offering human eggs from beautiful women for sale on the Internet ("Eggs for Sale," 1999). And so far, such on-line commerce seems to be beyond the reach of the law. Objecting to these egg auctions in cyberspace, Ron Wyden, the Democratic senator from Oregon who wrote the 1992 federal law regulating fertility clinics has called the operation "crass commercialism" (as cited in Lemonick, 1999).