Revises the given to eliminate flabby expressions

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Question: Flabby Expressions and Long Lead-ins

Revises the following to eliminate flabby expressions

a) We are sending a revised proposal at this time due to the fact that building costs have jumped at a considerable rate.

b) In the normal course of events, we would seek additional funding; however, in view of the fact that rates have increased, we cannot.

c) In very few cases has it been advisable for us to borrow money for a period of 90 or fewer days.

d) Inasmuch as our Web advertising income is increasing in a gradual manner, we might seek a loan in the amount of $50,000.

e) Despite the fact that we have had no response to our bid, we are still available in the event that you wish to proceed with your building project.

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