Revise the santance to remove the redundancies

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Q-Rewrite the the following santances to remove inapproriate use of passive voice:-

-Most of the information you need will be gathered as you document the history of the journals

-Come to the reception desk when you arrive.A packet with your name on it can picked up there

Q-Revise the following santance to remove the redundancies

-In grateful appreciation of your patronage,we are pleased to offer you this free gift as small token gesture of our gratitude.

-An anticipated major breakthrough in storage technology will allow us to proceed ahead in the continuing of our gratitude.

Q-Revise the following santances by replacing the vague elemnts with specific infromation,make up any reasonable details,

-The results won't be available for a while

The chemical spill in the lab caused extensive damage.

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