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Please check the given writing assignment "Effect of alcohol consumption on teenagers" for flow, organization, grammar and citation by considering the given format.

1. Title of paper and subtitles--Center and capitalize most words (except prepositions and the, a, an). Also, the subheadings should not be questions. .

2. Introduction--You do not have an attention getter. And you do not announce your Main Points in the thesis statement at the end of the first paragraph.

3. Organization--Because you do not announce your Main Points in the thesis, I can't understand what you are doing in paragraphs 2-5.

4. Sources and in-text citations--You have not cited enough. Many, many sentences in the papers are not your ideas or your writing, yet they are not cited with sources. So you have not been careful or strict enough in your use of sources. Also, you sometimes forget page numbers for articles.

5. Style--Your sentences are too long and complicated, and therefore you make many grammatical errors. Write short, simple sentences that are easy to understand.

6. Signal Verbs--You have not used the signal verbs I gave you on the handout. Mostly, you introduce sources with "said."

7. Grammar--Several times, you have "not only" in the wrong place, line up the not only but also as parallel phrases.

8. References--alphabetize sources; do not include degrees (such as Ph.D.); indent the second and third lines (choose "hanging indent" option in the Paragraphs option; Remove hyperlinks (underlining) by putting the cursor on the URL and right clicking, then choosing "Remove hyperlink: italicize the names of journals; fix many spacing errors

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Attachment:- Effect of alcohol consumption on teenagers.rar