The "Your most impressive clients:" under the results section needs to be renamed. - I think the background on the BPA test should be solid so it''s easier to read. - The title page text is a too low. The fruit is seen before the title. - We could probably just shorten "Benefits of Resveratrol on the body" to "Benefits of Resveratrol" for brevity and better flow. The first paragraph also makes the claim that RES can promote longevity. I couldn''t find a study that supports this claim. Research done on mice with RES shows potential so our wording should reflect this as an uncertainty. - The main study we used needs to be listed as a reference in the list. We can start the reference list on the top left panel if we need more room."

This is a group project. I have attached what others have done. All I want you to do is to modify the document. This is what the group leader told me to do "Jefferson I reviewed the changes that you made and think it looks good. There are some areas that need to be edited. - Organic should be organ systems. Or it might be better to state specifically what these systems are. Cardiovascular is one I think, I don''t remember the other but it might be in my discussion notes. - The results section might flow better as two bullet points that are the first and second sentence