Reference no: EM133033902
Be Clear and Concise
Style topics for these exercises include Sentence Structure, Noun Strings, Main Subject and Verb, Nominalizations, Wordy Phrases and Jargon, False Expletives, Active and Passive Voice, Gender, Clarity, Conciseness, and Tone, Sentence and Paragraph Organization and Flow, Parallelism in Sentences and Vertical Lists.
Read the given sentence or paragraph and revise it to into clear and concise content. Revisions avoid grammar and mechanical errors; place the subject and verb at the start of the sentence; consider voice, tone and word choice; replace wordy phrases; avoid false expletives, redundancy, and nominalization; apply the given-new principle to improve readability, and more!
To start, review the revision for this sentence.
Poor Example: Every 250 years, Pluto completes it's orbit around the sun
Revision: Pluto completes its orbit around the sun every 250 years.
Identify the corrections:
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