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Below is my assignment feedback for case study part 1 ( which is what needs to be fixed. )

1 - Document-name and title page: Both your title page and your file name are not as specified in the instructions.

2 - Footer. Use a footer to create page numbers for all pages except the title page: Your page numbers appear on the title page. See the instructions.

3 - Input Devices. Identify each input device type and show which specific user requirements are met: What about a webcam for video conferencing?

Did you overlook the need for a mouse? Not everyone likes to do all input via the keyboard.

4 - Output Devices. Identify each output device type and show which specific user requirements are met: The size of the monitor should be listed here. I know you have it in your first table, but this is a critical piece of information for the user reviewing the tables.

To do high quality audio editing, a headset/mic would be needed. Using built-in mic and speakers will not be sufficient in an office setting.

5 - Other Peripheral Devices. Identify other peripheral devices by type and show which specific user requirements are met: What about the required surge protection?

6 - Adapter Cards. Identify each type of adapter card and show which specific user requirements are met: The San disk is a storage device, not an adapter card. What about graphics and audio cards?

7 - Productivity Software. Identify types of software, recommended specific product names, and how this software meets specific user requirements.: MsAccess is not compatible with a Mac unless you are installing a parallel MS OS.

Kaspersky is a system utility, not a productivity package.

8 - Operating System. Identify a specific operating system and version: MS Office is NOT an operating system. It is an application suite for productivity. Remember, you are recommending a Mac and MS Office itself is not able to be loaded on a Mac.

9 - Web services. Identify the specific Web services that should be used: HTTP is not a web service. Think of programs you use only when connected to the internet - email, chat, instant messaging, video conference calls, etc. UDDI listed here by itself needs explanation. It is an XML-based registry for businesses worldwide to list themselves on the Internet.

10 - Executive Summary. A brief two-paragraph narrative that categorizes the user type, identifies the category of PC required, and summarizes recommendations .: At least two errors in grammar or spelling.

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