How well does this introduction draw you in

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Question 1. How well does this introduction draw you in? Do you want to keep reading? Why or why not? Suggest how the author might do this even more effectively.

Question 2. What is their thesis statement? Is it clear? How would you expect the rest of this essay to progress, based on this thesis statement?

Question 3. Any suggestions or concerns you can share with the author? Be as honest as you can.

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