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Primary Research
For the primary research, a case study was conducted to explore the impact of nutrition on fertility outcomes. The case study collected data from a diverse group of men and women aged 25-40 who were trying to conceive. The participants were recruited from fertility clinics in various regions and were asked to provide detailed information about their dietary habits, including the consumption of macronutrients and micronutrients. Fertility outcomes, such as time to conception and pregnancy rates, were also recorded.
I. Reflect on how you might improve your Results Section by answering the following questions
How methods work together to support your thesis statement?
Which of these two research strategies offered the most significant, relevant, and/or interesting data to support your thesis statement?
In your textual report you are reporting your results. The Guidelines suggest that you should "use your data to support your thesis by using one or more of the listed reporting strategies." Which of these reporting strategies discussed in the guidelines is most likely to work for your situation? Why
What questions or concerns, if any, do you have about how you are using all of your data together to support your thesis. Note that you will only get prompt and certain answers to those questions if you send me an email.
II. Revise/Improve your Results Section
Choose this option if your results section still needs some work. Here you should continue working on this important part of your final research report. The following tips should be helpful:
Start by identifying 2-5 main findings then develop a topic sentence for each finding.
Make frequent reference to your research in your topic sentences. For example, The survey shows... This research suggests, Through analysis we can see... etc.
Provide details from your research (i.e. survey data; survey quotes; secondary sources not from your literature review) as examples of the finding that you mentioned in your topic sentence.
Do not hesitate to use supporting evidence from both of your methods in the same paragraph. Note that your primary research was already introduced in the methods section and you only need to introduce your secondary research by providing the full name and credentials of the author in an attributive tag. Reference the student example to see what this looks like.
Use your own words and ideas to show how the data, idea or quote illustrates the finding described in the topic sentence.
Make sure that you end the paragraph with your own words/ideas that show your reader how the data illustrates the finding mentioned in the topic sentence.