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Discussion 1: Society may not realize how everyone around the world engages in the same/similar services or activities; people identify them with various titles. In Japan, they offer and advertise family rental services (actors) to mainly fill voids in their lives. Here in the U.S., we hire people to assist with our daily living both outside and inside of our homes with our children as well as elders, for example, daycares/nannies, in-home caregivers, and counselors.
1. No 2nd person pronouns (you) are used anywhere in the essay, except possibly in quotes from the reading.
2. The hook is creative and interesting
3. The introduction includes the author's full name and the title of the article in quotation marks.
4. The thesis includes 3 points and is at the end of the intro.
5. Each body paragraph begins with a transitions word and a topic sentence.
6. Each body paragraph includes a quotes from the article with a signal phrase.
7. The original explanations in each body paragraph are clear and strong.
8. The conclusion restates the full name of the author and title of the article.
9. The conclusion restates the three points from the thesis.
10. The essay is free of grammar errors.