Reference no: EM133455577
Questions:
1. Looking at the introduction, does anything feel repetitious? How could the author possibly ?x these errors?
2. Ideally the thesis statement should be presented at the last sentence of the introduction.
3. Looking at the last sentence of the intro, what do you make of the thesis? Does it answer the so what"? Can anything be improved upon?
4. The ?rst sentence of each body paragraph of your essay should not only support the thesis but state the focus of each body paragraph. Do the topic sentences of the ?rst, second, and third body paragraphs support the thesis? Does all of the information within each body paragraph stay focused on the idea presented in each topic sentence?
5. When looking at the information within each body paragraph and referencing your handouts about incorporating quotations, how can some of the quotes from the story be improved upon?
6. The conclusion of a literary analysis should provide some summary and ?nal thoughts to drive home the idea presented in your thesis. Keeping this in mind, do you feel the author's conclusion effective?
7. What would you grade this essay (A, B, C, D, or F)?