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Review and revise your introduction paragraph. Below We live in a community not designed for physical activity. Having a park in our community will encourage us to have an active lifestyle, healthier bodies, and improved mental health. We need to build a recreational park in the community for people of all ages. Our health is at risk, and not getting enough physical activity increases our chances of developing underlying diseases, including our children. One problem in our community is the increase in obesity in children and adults because there are no parks nearby and there are no parks in our community. The HOA should approve the proposal to build the park. The main solution is to involve influential leaders to help the community, maybe they will even donate to the playground. One problem in the community is It's not feasible to drive to a park after a long hard day at work. ; then, Neighbors in the community and the Home of Association Committee. should Approve the proposal to build a recreational park in the community .Proposals to build recreational parks in the community should be approved. The main objection to the proposal is that while some people may be harmed, the proposed solution would be more effective because it would help improve social skills, self-esteem and a healthier lifestyle for everyone in the community. Everyone will be more excited to go out and have fun and exercise more.