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Insert transitional words & phrases within the FIRST PARAGRAPH to make it more cohesive & less choppy. To do so, you’ll need to determine what kind of relationships exist between sentences and phrases & choose transitions that are appropriate. You may change punctuation as needed.

Provide a smooth transition sentence to begin the SECOND PARAGRAPH and smoothly connect it to the preceding paragraph. (Notice the good transition that opens the 1st paragraph).

The paragraph preceding this on in the essay gives health statistics for several fast food establishments, focusing specifically on high cholesterol count.

In spite of such negative statistics, I will continue to frequent Wendy’s in the Student Union building. The fries are excellent. They are rarely too greasy. They are usually fresh and crispy. They aren’t too crispy. The burgers are sizzling hot. The warmth of the burger is accentuated by the coolness of the mayonnaise & other condiments. A Frosty makes a good dessert. Dinner at Wendy’s is not healthy. The food tastes great.

Wendy’s has great service. I particularly appreciate the lightening-fast finger work of the Wendy’s cashier as he punches students’ orders into the magic box. When he quickly enters my order, I am confident that he takes his work very seriously. Likewise, the other Wendy’s employees are professional & courteous. They too acknowledge the need to work quickly & effectively, and their service reflects such an understanding.