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Project: Global Business Plan, you will submit the final business plan. It should be a complete, polished artifact containing all of the main elements of the final product. It should reflect the incorporation of feedback gained throughout the course.

Professor Feedbacks

Feedback 1: This submission is very good in many ways but it could benefit from more sources and citation in the body of the paper. It could benefit from more analysis where we use the tools that have been provided. We would like to see a bit more integration where you apply the course concepts and interrelate them to your project. The critical thinking and analysis was quite good in most areas but we are seeking a bit more depth in other sections. The research was good but a bit more depth there is also wise, the writing is very professional and flows well but the project could benefit from better or more citation.

Feedback 2: Thanks so much for taking the time to fill out this product or service need worksheet you have done some great work. We asked you to look at type timing and perceived benefit of the need. You analyzed the perceived benefits and risks, as well as the price vs performance the market size and potential and availability of consumer funds. We also asked you to provide some information on the costs and you did well on that worksheet as well. However you did not cite the work well I saw some references but we also need to see you cite the information in the work.