Australian student, total 1600 words. You need to watch a video in order to complete the assignment, I am unable to send that, so I send the script of video. Focus & Introduction - There is a dear introduction that outlines the topic, and contextuatises and profiles the scope, content and the sequence of the essay topic. Descriptive Content Relevance, Support & Examples - The content is relevant to the topic. Student has highlighted in detail all the relevant significant factors; explained and analysed the concepts and or issues and their importance. Referred to relevant theory and literature to support their reasoning and examples are presented.

Critical Thinking, Analysis & Reasoning - There is evidence of both depth and breadth of reading. An argument is presented and well supported with evidence. Emphasised the importance of consumer/carer perspectives throughout the discussion. Conclusion & Synthesis - There is a concluding paragraph which restates the topic, provides a summary of all the key points, and presents an overall conclusion.

Sequencing & Accuracy - The content in the essay matches the outline presented in the introductory paragraph. Most paragraphs are organised in a logical manner so that content flows from one paragraph to the next, and there are dear linking sentences that link each paragraph to the next. The essay ends with a rational conclusion. Sources & Referencing - Credible and relevant references are used. References are recent primary refereed sources and seminal works. Accurate use of APA referencing style on most occasions, Accurate use of in-text citations. Sentence Structure, Grammar, Spelling & Punctuation - There are no errors with grammar, spelling and punctuation that impact readability, and the meaning is easily discernible. There is no use of discriminative or stigmatising language.