Explain why your revised sentences

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Question: Writing Lecture #5 explains that good writing is

precise (it says exactly what it means),

concise (it wastes no words, and avoids redundancy),

vigorous (it favors the active voice), and

fresh (it avoids cliches, platitudes, truisms, and cultivates apt and fresh metaphors).

Take two or three sentences from your most recent essay that John Trimble would characterize as "broken." Revise your prose by tightening, sharpening, or brightening. Explain why your revised sentences now better serve your reader's needs for clarity, concision, and freshness.

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