Reference no: EM133395795

Your post and replies must be original and dissimilar to other students. This will be factored into earning points. Be sure to read through the discussion thread and create an original post and reply. If your ideas are similar to another student that has posted before you, you should mention him/her and build on their comment in your post. **Evidence of reading though the discussion thread is factored into earning points.

Directions:
Create your post as directed below. Points will only be awarded to posts and replies that answer each peer review question individually.

Your Post

In your post, you should copy your:

Outline
Thesis Statement
At least one body paragraph

Your Replies

Respond to 2 other classmates. In your replies to your classmates, you should respond to the following questions about your classmates' outlines, thesis statements, and body paragraphs:

OUTLINE (copy the questions and answer each one)

Does the outline demonstrate how the paper will carry a single argument throughout the entire paper?
Is the order of ideas and examples presented in the outline following a logical progression?
Does the outline contain all of the paper's requirements?
THESIS (copy the questions and answer each one)

Does the thesis present a point and what it will prove about the point?
Explain one strength about the thesis.
Explain one aspect to be improved about the thesis. (Replies like, "Nothing needs improvement" are not acceptable. There is always something that can be improved.)
BODY PARAGRAPH (complete for at least one body paragraph, copy the questions and answer each one)

Does the paragraph have a clear topic sentence that tells you what the point of the paragraph is? Provide feedback.
Does the paragraph include an example in the form of a quotation?
Has the writer introduced and integrated the quotation well? Provide feedback.
Does the paragraph contain an analysis which explains their point presented in the topic sentence? Provide feedback.
Explain one strength about the body paragraph.
Explain one aspect to be improved about the body paragraph. (Replies like, "Nothing needs improvement" are not acceptable. There is always something that can be improved.)
Does the body paragraph support the thesis?