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First. Author's paper with your comments in the margin then complete the worksheets
Author of Draft:
Reviewer of Draft:
Directions:
By answering the following questions thoughtfully and clearly, be as helpful as possible to the author of this draft. Use complete sentences and specific examples, and make as many comments as possible. You will be evaluated on the thoughtfulness and helpfulness of your responses.
1. Introduction: The first paragraph(s) should prepare the reader for the topic and position/argument presented in the paper.
a. Does the introduction explain the topic and its importance? Any suggestions?
b. Does the writer clearly define his/her position on the topic and/or define his/her purpose for writing (thesis)?
c. After reading the whole paper, explain whether you think the introduction effectively prepares the reader for the discussion or not.
2. Body: The body of the paper presents the supporting information for the topic/argument and should be divided into logical sections or sub-topics.
a. Do the body paragraphs support the thesis?
b. Is there information included that does not seem relevant to the stated thesis/purpose?
c. Are examples, statistics, and outside sources used to illustrate and support the writer's argument?
d. Does the writer explain his/her reasoning clearly and effectively?
e. Does one point/section logically lead to the next point? Are transitions used effectively?
3. Style and Mechanics:
a. Are there grammar, spelling, and/or punctuation errors that distract the reader from the argument? Is there a specific area of weakness or pattern of errors that the writer should focus on?
b. Does the writer use sentence constructions and diction that are appropriate for the audience and purpose?
c. Are paraphrased, summarized, and/or quoted sources effectively incorporated into the writer's paper? Are outside sources correctly cited?
4. SUMMARY: Provide a general written summary of your evaluation of the quality of the essay.
5. Overall: How near to completion is this draft? What steps should the author take to complete this assignment? Be specific and helpful by listing the three most important steps the author should take:
6. Provide a checked rank based on the following categories:
Outstanding _____
Excellent _____
Good _____
Fair _____
Poor _____
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