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writting a paper on describe the view of what i seen of nature when, i walked outside. I had to Consider using my five senses: see, smell, touch, taste, hear.Can someone correct my grammar, and make my paper flow better, and give it a good conclusion?

Describing the view in seen today

Today, I woke up at 9:00 am to get ready for my 11:00 am class. I did my morning routine of showering, getting dress, cooking breakfast, and eating. After doing my morning routine, I grabbed, back pack and all of my school work. When I walked out of the front door, I noticed that it was raining hard. As, I walked to my car I noticed that it was very cold, the clouds were greyish looking, and the air smelled crisp, and fresh. Just before getting to my car, I looked around and notice the grass across the street was light brown, and it looked very bright, even though it was dreary outside. Finally getting into my car, and heading toward my school, I notice that there not that much traffic; if any.

While traveling to my destination, the rain started to pour down hard, making visibility to see hard. Once I reached my destination, the rain was still but I was raining lightly. When I got out of my car, I notice that the sky was still gray, but the surrounding environment lighting looked like it was getting light from the sun, because the tree looked so green, and lush, the flowers looked like they had just blossom, and the it wasn't as cold out anymore.

When finally, got to my class, looking outside the windows inside, I noticed that outside looked like a painting; the tree adjacent to the building over seemed to blend in, creating a painting like feel that just, brought out the surrounding area.