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I agree with your argument that consumers should understand and be able to translate the information presented to them concerning their health. I also believe that it is important for people that don't happen to get the information presented to them on certain health issues should get their information in a simpler way so they would understand. I also believe that with this type of society we are living that filled with everything being on the internet people are less likely to take their time to understand a statistic behind some certain health care issues. With that being said, I believe it is essential for doctors, advertisers, and statistician to ensure that the products share to the public is simplified to the level of the average American on certain health products. I agree with you that the "average Americans have a low level of Statistical knowledge." Some Americans don't think of the word statistics even though it being used daily. For the handful of people that are aware of the impact that people with average to low statistical knowledge should understand the statistics being presented to them. I also think your biblical quotes goes with your argument because I believe we as the human should tell others the truth when it comes to information they need to know regardless of the situation. If we have any doubt, we should ask God for ideas.