Due to conflict happening within the country

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"Due to the conflict happening within the country, Syrian refugees fleeing the country add to the strain put upon host countries leading to sowing regional tensions and straining national governments." Here are questions for this writer: if the reader doesn't already know what "conflict" is happening within Syria, does the vague opening phrase give her valuable information? does the passive "put upon" make clear who or what is straining the countries taking in the refugees? is there a need to repeat the idea about a strain on the host? Which parts of the original sentence could be trimmed or deleted?

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