Draft an email you want to send to all employees

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Purpose - The purpose of this assignment is to take the email below and re-write it to be courteous, conversational and professional.

Instructions

Read the scenario below
Rewrite the below email, in no more than 250 words
Use headers, bullet points and formatting to help convey your message
You are expected to change sentences, word choice, structure, in ways that supports a professional and appropriate email
Format your assignment as if it were an email

Scenario - You are a member of the IT Department at a mid-size consulting firm. You have been asked to send an email from your department, to all company employees. Below is your first draft an email you want to send to all employees. Upon re-reading your draft, you want to re-write it to be have a more professional and appropriate tone.

From: Jane Smith

To: All Staff

Cc: HR Department

Subject: Ridiculous whiners!!!!

A bunch of you have complained to me about the new SharePoint structure being ridiculous to navigate. I looked into it and asked around. Most of you said it was fine, but a few kept insisting that our intranet is not organized and is totally bonkers to use. To stop them whining, I looked into the matter further. I found that the people complaining about the intranet structure were mostly those consultants who work remotely and who mainly interact with the intranet from their iPads. I have no idea why they are complaining because the IT Department offered lunchtime training sessions on how to use SharePoint on mobile devices and they didn't even bother coming!!!!!!! WE CANNOT HELP YOU IF YOU ARE UNWILLING TO ADAPT TO THIS TECHNOLOGY. SharePoint is here to stay, so you'd better get used to it. Shape up or ship out!

Reference no: EM133577914

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