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Part 1 Essay Draft
Post a draft of your final project essay for others to review. Copying and pasting it into the forum textbox (rather than attaching as a Word file) is preferred. The format may not look the same, but that's okay. Don't worry if your draft is rough or not quite finished. Post as much of it as you have done. Please put your thesis statement in bold. Please include at least one in-text citation and one Works Cited or References entry. Make your initial post by mid-week to give folks time to review it.
Part 2 Concerns and Request for Help
After you have posted your draft, please share any concerns you may have about the process of writing this paper. (If you don't have concerns or questions, that's fine. You don't have to post anything in this section.) Do you have any questions about MLA or APA usage? Is there anything troubling you about this essay? Do you need help in any specific area? Did you find any aspect of this essay (research, outlining, drafting, etc.) particularly stressful? If so, let us help!
What the thesis statement is? Is the thesis statement one concise sentence?
2. Does the introduction provide a good gateway into the paper? Does the conclusion provide a satisfying sense of closure?
3. Do the supporting details of each paragraph support that particular topic sentence? Are there any sentences that do not belong? Why do they not belong?
4. Did the author use transitions? Which words are transitions and where are they used? Can you suggest any other transition words that would work well in this essay?
5. Do you see any sentences that could be improved upon?
6. Did the author use third person only and avoid first and second person? Do you see words that have negative connotations or that create logical fallacies (such as using the phrase "No one will accept the idea that...")?
7. Do you see grammatical or mechanical issues that distract from the writer's ideas? What effects do those issues have on your view of the you will be in, just choose the thread that interests you most. Click the link here to see the description of the university's programs and the schools those programs are in: Schools and Programs at APUS
1. Thread 1 - Schools of Arts & Humanities, Education, & Health Sciences. Please see the attached list which shows APUS programs (majors) and the schools they are located in. The general studies program is included here. Make your initial post as a response to my post here. Do not start your own thread.
2. Thread 2 - School of Science, Technology, Engineering, & Math. Please see the attached list which shows APUS programs (majors) and the schools they are located in. Make your initial post as a response to my post here. Do not start your own thread.
3. Thread 3 - Schools of Security & Global Studies & Business. Please see the attached list which shows APUS programs (majors) and the schools they are located in. Make your initial post as a response to my post here. Do not start your own thread.
Schools of Security & Global Studies & Business. Please see the attached list which shows APUS programs (majors) and the schools they are located in. Make your initial post as a response to my post here. Do not start your own thread.
Make your initial post mid-week to give folks a chance to respond to you. Make sure all your posts add to and expand the discussion. The highest grades go to those students who really contribute to an energized, stimulating conversation. Be sure to respond to initial posts in the thread that you are in. Feel free to visit other threads as well.
Attachment:- Assignment.rar
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