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So, I am writing a really important essay, and the research question is " To what extent is EEG biofeedback a more effective therapeutic approach than MRI in reducing antisocial behavior in criminals?".
I wrote my introduction about it, and the intro discusses the Introduction of the topic, the Significance of the research question, and the Methodology and sources. So, I wrote my introduction, but there is part of it I need to edit.
The part I need to edit:
"Since it can result in violence and crime, antisocial behavior is a major issue in many nations. People with antisocial tendencies may commit crimes or engage in other harmful activities to others (Calkins & Keane, 2009). These violent and criminal activities are commonplace today in the news and on social media. Therefore, it is crucial to comprehend how to deal with criminals and antisocial individuals in order to lower crime and violence. Psychologists have found early intervention to be critical due to the high prevalence of antisocial personality disorders (Calkins & Keane, 2009). As a result, psychologists are considering and recommending several treatment modalities, such as magnetic resonance imaging (MRI) and electroencephalogram biofeedback, that can assist in resolving this issue. "
For this part above, I need to Cite more case studies or other key literature that helps contextualize and explain the significance of my research question. so, I need to add and explain case studies that show how EEG biofeedback and MRI are good treatments for antisocial behavior in criminals and another 2 case studies that show that EEG biofeedback is a better treatment than MRI to treat antisocial behavior in criminals.
Also, you can use any outside resources to help you find case studies or other key literature as long as they are relatable and significant to the introduction and are reliable key literature that helps you contextualize and explain the significance of my research question ( The research question: To what extent is EEG biofeedback a more effective therapeutic approach than MRI in reducing antisocial behavior in criminals?)
Please do this task carefully and give it your all.