Comments as per referencing apply here as well. If a literature review, a little more description of the different elements would be needed. If an application assessment, actual examples, and a discussion / analysis of the implications for business would be needed Comment [G25]: All reports should be concluded with a Conclusion – also Recommendations if required This section should be a brief summary of the main purpose and points – conclusions and recommendations should be clearly identifiable from the preceding discussions and analysis. There should be no new material or comment in these sections, so there should be no references – all references should have already been inserted in the appropriate place in the body of the report. Well presented using Word’s auto referencing system (References tab) Obviously the Bibliography should start on a new page. Obviously the references would be real names and should be spell checked and proof read.

The reference needs to be presented correctly as per Harvard Style e.g. (Brown, 2009), and paragraph rephrased to explain this table, or table can be included and explained. If included, table should be given a title and source Quotes should probably be in italics as well for clear distinction - Reference needs to include Author and date This is a new idea so should be in a new paragraph, also should contain some theory / referenced support for the point being discussed

Comment Good use of header – provided it clearly states the title and other relevant information Good headings structure – uses Word’s Style management – Home tab Introduction, with sub-headings of Aims and Scope or Focus would be a more appropriate headings for this section Comment : Ideally there should be a clear line space between paragraphs Good paragraph construction – 1 idea per para and not too long

Comment [G3]: Title page is attractive but an image more appropriate to the report topic would improve This sample assessment is a reasonable overview of a text chapter. If it were a Literature Review Assessment it would be quite good, with some improvements as per comments below. If, however, this was an assessment where the writers were asked to analyse the new product development process for businesses today, many more actual application and practical examples would be needed for an acceptable response – comments below indicate where these should be included Comment [G4]: Mostly well constructed Table of Contents – uses Word’s auto Table of Contents – References tab Needs to also include Conclusions, Recommendations (if included), Bibliography and Appendices /Attachments

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