Summarize some of the challenges women faced that made it difficult for them to enjoy surfing from the early 1900s and on

Your Thesis: Discuss one point of comparison and one point of contrast regarding challenges faced by today's professional women surfers (post-1990's) and their predecessors (pre-1990's). 

Topic Sentence: Restate using new wording the first thesis idea that this whole paragraph will focus on very specifically.

Your thesis's one specific similar challenge faced by today's professional women surfers (post-1990's) and their predecessors (pre-1990's):

Provide one quotation in MLA format.  Reduce to 3 lines if longer using ellipses.

Less than 4 lines:

Westwick and Neushul write, "XX" (35).

Explain what the quotation is saying in detail in your own words.  Make sure a reader unfamiliar with the text would be able to understand you without confusion.  Aim for 4-5 or more sentences.

Provide a summary of a video scene or quotation from a web article on modern women surfers that supports your topic sentence claim. 

Explain how we should interpret the meaning of the video or article in your own words.  Make sure a reader unfamiliar with the text would be able to understand you without confusion.  Aim for 4-5 or more sentences.

If you want to add and discuss more quotations or video examples from World in the Curl or other resources, you can put them here.

• Quotation or Video Scene Summary:

• Analysis:

Argument: Explain how all the quotations and video examples together support your topic sentence claim.

Add a concluding sentence reminding the reader of how your examples support your topic sentence claim.  Should look similar to topic sentence but be more detailed.

Topic sentence: Restate using new wording the second thesis idea that this whole paragraph will focus on very specifically.

Your thesis's one specific contrasting or different way in which today's professional women surfers (post-1990's) and their predecessors (pre-1990's) face challenges to success. 

Provide one quotation in MLA format.  Reduce to 3 lines if longer using ellipses.

Less than 4 lines:

Westwick and Neushul write, "XX" (35).

Explain what the quotation is saying in detail in your own words.  Make sure a reader unfamiliar with the text would be able to understand you without confusion.  Aim for 4-5 or more sentences.

Provide a summary of a video scene or quotation from a web article on modern women surfers that supports your topic sentence claim. 

Explain how we should interpret the meaning of the video or article in your own words.  Make sure a reader unfamiliar with the text would be able to understand you without confusion.  Aim for 4-5 or more sentences.

If you want to add and discuss more quotations or video examples from World in the Curl or other resources, you can put them here.

• Quotation or Video Scene Summary:

• Analysis:

Argument: Explain how all the quotations and video examples together support your topic sentence claim.

Add a concluding sentence reminding the reader of how your examples support your topic sentence claim.  Should look similar to topic sentence but be more detailed.

Restate your thesis using new wording (no cutting and pasting from thesis itself)

Your last reflections on this topic.