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Combine each set of sentences to eliminate wordy constructions.

1. Each new attempt of ranchers to raise exotic animals like emu, ostrich, and bison for the commercial value of their meats follows a pattern. There is a similar pattern to each new attempt. Each new attempt begins when a few people make the claim that some exotic animal tastes better than beef and is more nutritious.Each new attempt of ranchers to raise exotic animals like emu, ostrich, and bison for the commercial value of their meats follows a similar pattern when a few people begin to claim that some exotic animal tastes better than beef and is more nutritious.

2. Emus were discovered by ranchers. Emus are birds that look like small ostriches. Emus quickly became unprofitable to raise. Only a few consumers found emu meat tasty.Ranchers discovered Emus, which are birds that look like small ostriches that quickly became unprofitable because only a few consumers found emu meat tasty.

3. It was found by ostrich ranchers that there was an early, strong demand for the meat of ostriches. That strong demand soon fizzled out quite a bit, the ranchers found. Ostrich Ranchers found that the early, strong demand for the meat of ostriches soon fizzled out quite a bit.

4. There is the American Ostrich Association. The membership of the American Ostrich Association now has only 500 people belonging to it.Only 500 people belong to the membership of the American Ostrich Association.

5. Bison, also known as buffalo, were a longer-lasting craze. Ranchers had a strong desire to own the mighty animals; however, the price of bison was increased greatly by the demand. It became uneconomical for ranchers to purchase young animals.Bison, also known as buffalo, were a longer-lasting craze for ranchers; however, it became uneconomical for ranchers to purchase young animals because the price of bison was increased greatly by the demand.

6. Also, bison are difficult to raise. They tend to need strong fences to hold them in. They cannot find enough food to eat. They eat by graze. The land of some buffalo ranches consists of poor pasture land or is in mountainous terrain.Bison are also difficult to raise because strong fences are needed to hold them in and they cannot find enough food to graze since some buffalo ranches consist of poor pasture land or are in mountainous terrain.

7. Recently, the yak has been discovered by ranchers. The yak is an animal from Central Asia. It is from rugged mountainous areas. For centuries, the yak has supported the people of the Himalayan region.Recently, in the rugged mountainous areas of Central Asia ranchers discovered the yak which supported the people of the Himalayan region for centuries.


8. Yaks have the ability to forage more efficiently compared to bison or cows. Yaks are easier to care for than bison or cows. Yaks possess a better resistance to many diseases.Yaks have the ability to forage more efficiently, are easier to care for, and posses a better resistance to many diseases compared to bison or cows.

9. Chiefs in a few gourmet restaurants are beginning to serve yak meat. They are devising fancy recipes for it. They are featuring it on their menus. The meat is mild-tasting and succulent. The meat is also low in fat.Chiefs in a few gourmet restaurants are devising fancy recipes to feature on their menu to begin serving yak meat, which is mild-tasting, succulent, and low in fat.

10. Even though yaks are easy to raise and even are environmentally friendly, there is a problem. The ranchers must overcome that problem before they can raise yaks profitably. The problem is the fact that consumers lack familiarity with yaks. Consumers have a reluctance to try yak meat.Even though yaks are easy to raise and even are environmentally friendly, ranchers must overcome the reluctance of consumers to try yak meat because they lack familiarity with yaks.