Reference no: EM132633574

Topics: Locate digital object identifiers and place them properly in citations, apply the principles of academic integrity when researching and citing sources, identify citation errors within a paragraph, create paragraphs that integrate sources.

Could you please review the following short paragraph on a hypothetical paper about cybersecurity and the Internet of Things. Note that the writer has made some errors in his integration of Shindell as a source. Identify at least two errors, and describe what the errors are in one or two sentences.

One potential method of hacking into a hospital's records is through a wearable device. Often, wearable devices are used by health care institutions to monitor blood pressure or other health conditions. However, such devices expose vulnerabilities in the system. (Shindell, 2018) argues that hackers increasingly integrate malware to infect such devices and then use them as foundations upon which to attack the health care institution's IT systems. Specifically, Shindell, 2018, maintains that ransomware is especially pernicious. "During an attack, victims will typically encounter a screen giving them directions for paying a ransom to retrieve their data..." "More than half of hospitals surveyed were hit with ransomware in the previous 12 months."