Reference no: EM132527956

Analyse the errors in the paragraphs below and correct them using the suitable tenses (present perfect tense/ past tense).

1. Furthermore, in order to handle the job, any tasks given to me can surely be fulfilled as I equip myself with valuable knowledge and skills to work as sport and recreation assistant. For example, the certificates I received based on the first aid and basic outdoor recreation skills training I attend in 2018 may highlight my ability in doing the job.

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2. Your organisation should see me as an outgoing person as I enjoy doing volunteer works. I volunteer for bird count every month in Seri Serdang since I was in university. Plus, multiple research regarding birds are done by my research team when we do our final research project during my undergraduate study, and hopefully the knowledge I have based on the research we did can help in improving the city.
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3. I recently graduate from Universiti Putra Malaysia with a Bachelor of Accountancy. Throughout the four years of studying, I gain a lot of knowledge related to the field for instance MIA, MIQC, ACCA and ICAEW as that knowledge is required by both local and international accounting bodies. Moreover, I expose myself to get used to work environment as I opt to work as an account assistant on a part time basis.

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4. Your company will surely be benefited by hiring me as I have valuable experience in dealing with foreign clients. In my previous work experience, I manage to close huge deals contributing to large amount of profit for the company. Apart from that, in order to boost my confidence and help to communicate with my foreign clients, I undergo a number of foreign language classes in 2018.

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